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Friday, November 25, 2016

My amazing weekend

                   My amazing weekend

We are learning to edit our work. anything in purple has been improved.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Summer I liked this recount you made , You are very lucky to be in a marching club you are super lucky to travel too! I hope you had fun there. Oh and also if you didn't win in in the game of life it doesn't really matter to me I think you still won. Next step before you post make sure you edit first. Well that's it BYE!

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