This term (term 4) we are focusing on commitment as our kete/inquiry
The question is... what does commitment mean to me? To me commitment means sticking to something that you have signed up for because you thought you were interested in it. When ever I think about commitment the phrase that pops into my head is getting it done meaning getting something over and done with even if you are not sure about it still going through with it.
a goals for me
- try to be focused at all time's
- try to stop talking about pickle's in class
- try to listen to the teacher when she/he is talking
I love the way you have worded your sentences. My favourite part was reading over your personal goals. I will just say that you may want to fix up some of your punctuation as some of it doesn't make as much sense as the rest. Hey, you should check out my blog as well.
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Sahana ;)
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DeleteBOLA! Hi my name is Jack I am from Hornby High School. I think that your blog post is amazing, I can tell you know what "commitment" Means. Maybe next time you could make the font a bit bigger because it a little small but it makes it look nice. I find it good that you have when you started and what you are up to on the commitment kete. other then that it was a nice blog post.
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-Jack
Hi Summer, I really enjoyed ready your post, I also like how you broke it down and said, what does commitment mean to you. I think commitment is really important to everyone so i'm really glad that you posted this. I think you did good but what you need to work on is that you should really make your writing a bit bigger.
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-Siola