Hi Summer, Izzy here. I like how you have filled out everything. Maybe next time you could add an explanation on your work. What place in Hornby mall is your favourite?
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Hi Summer, Izzy here. I like how you have filled out everything. Maybe next time you could add an explanation on your work. What place in Hornby mall is your favourite?
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