Hey Summer, I really like your post I Saw that you spelt the word bell like "ball" so maybe you could change that. I really like how when the bell rang that the windows went black to show the lights going off. Maybe next time you could add a bit more people, Also I like how you have got the names in there to.
Hi, Summer. I really loved your maths animation. I liked how you put a lot of colors in it and you said at the end who was starring the animation. I have a question, was I supposed to learn something from the animation or was it just a entertainment?
Bonjour Summer. I love your animation it is really creative and easy to see. Maybe next time you should make the words a bit bigger so it's more clear to see. Au Revoir
Hey Alyscia thanks for the feed back yup i will make the words a bit bigger next time i look at the animation and you cant really see the words thanks for commenting.
Hi Summer, Lauren here. I liked your animation. You must be smart to know the answers to those questions. Something you could do to improve it is to check your spelling like on slide 33. Besides that, I liked it! Can't wait for your next post!
Hey Lauren i know there's spelling mistakes and the questions where easy i just did easy ones i will keepin mind of the feed back you gave me thanks for commenting.
Hey Summer I liked the animation you have presented you should make more because they are really cool. Next time you do a animation you should check your answer when the girl summer asks the question because I can see that the answer is incorrect
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Hey Summer, I really like your post I Saw that you spelt the word bell like "ball" so maybe you could change that. I really like how when the bell rang that the windows went black to show the lights going off. Maybe next time you could add a bit more people, Also I like how you have got the names in there to.
ReplyDeleteHey Kasey thanks for telling me about the spelling mistakes and next time i will add more people thanks for commenting.
DeleteHi, Summer. I really loved your maths animation. I liked how you put a lot of colors in it and you said at the end who was starring the animation. I have a question, was I supposed to learn something from the animation or was it just a entertainment?
ReplyDeleteHey faith no it was just a maths animation for fun i wanted easy answers but thanks for the feedback and commenting.
DeleteBonjour Summer.
ReplyDeleteI love your animation it is really creative and easy to see.
Maybe next time you should make the words a bit bigger so it's more clear to see.
Au Revoir
Hey Alyscia thanks for the feed back yup i will make the words a bit bigger next time i look at the animation and you cant really see the words thanks for commenting.
DeleteHi Summer, Lauren here. I liked your animation. You must be smart to know the answers to those questions. Something you could do to improve it is to check your spelling like on slide 33. Besides that, I liked it! Can't wait for your next post!
ReplyDeleteHey Lauren i know there's spelling mistakes and the questions where easy i just did easy ones i will keepin mind of the feed back you gave me thanks for commenting.
DeleteHey Summer
ReplyDeleteI liked the animation you have presented you should make more because they are really cool.
Next time you do a animation you should check your answer when the girl summer asks the question because I can see that the answer is incorrect