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Tuesday, September 6, 2016

The Trip To The snow

                  The Trip To The Snow

Today I'm going to show you my trip to the snow story using screencastify here is the video for yous to watch hope you enjoy.




I like this story because this is the best story and the longest story that I have ever done my next step is to yous more exciting words in my story's.


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2 comments:

  1. Lee-Anne WahoSeptember 6, 2016 at 12:25 PM

    Kia ora Summer
    You worked so well on this today. Thank you for your focus in class. I see your audio is a little crackly so we will work on this to check out why this is. We will work together in class to help you with your next step of using more exciting vocabulary.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 13, 2016 at 10:58 AM

    Kia ora Summer it is Tamara here
    You were really focused when you had done it Good job you worked really well In your story as you have said when you had fallen over you could not get up but at least the people helped you to get up Good Job Summer you did really well

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