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Wednesday, July 6, 2016

My before and after blog comment

  

                My before and after blog comments

In literacy we have been learning how to do good blog comments.

Before






This is not a good comment because I have not got a greeting or a fall stop at the end and it does not have a capital.

After





Now this is better but I still have no greeting so next time I will have a greeting in my comment. 

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